Whoever had the final say on the design of the bottle for the 2022 Cline Family Cellars Ancient Vines Zinfandel—which stood up nicely to the spicy and delicious Korean cuisine Tony made for us last week—likes words. Lots and lots of words.
I’m OK with almost all of the words, but I have a quibble with the “of” in this last sentence of text before the website URL: “In order to survive, the ancient vines pushed their roots deep into the sandy soil and reward us with a wine of intense depth, dark fruit flavor, and a plush velvet finish.” The “of” works fine with “intense depth,” but it doesn’t work with “dark fruit flavor” or “a plush velvet finish.”
Even though there’s already a “with” in the sentence, I think the “of” has to be changed to “with.” That preposition works with all three objects.